Title: I'm taking Charge
Character: Ralph
We just landed on an island where there is no parents. This is the time to have fun, only we can't have fun if we know that we are stranded on on island. If every person on the island votes me to be the head cheif i'm going to take charge of everyone even the little kids. I met a boy named Piggy he's like a lonely fat boy. On our jorney to find a way off of the island Piggy found a conch and he asked me to blow it to call all of the people on the island our way. Once all of the kids came we had to decide who was going to take charge while we were on our own. Most of the kids voted that I will take charge and I became the head of the hunters. Then Simon, Jack, and I went to travel around the island to look for more ways to get off of the island and we left Piggy. I thought to myself about how much I would need Piggy because he is the one with all of the good ideas. While we were exploring the island we found a pig and they wanted me to kill the pig, but I didn't want to kill it because it would have been to much blood for me to see and I guess I would have a lot of guilt of killing the pig.
2 comments:
I like how you said in the frist sentence theres no parents and this is a time to have fun. Then in the end how you said that jack would of had guilt if he did kill the pig.
Jessica,
I really enjoyed your entry because the condensed paragraph was honest and straightforward. I found it very easy to understand and relate to. It speaks with simplicity, as I would imagine Ralph's thought pattern to be at the moment. Your main points really grabbed the readers attention. Good Job! :)
*Note: Ralph is the main leader and Jack is the head of the hunters*
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